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Post by Donald Deruty on Sept 29, 2011 19:07:00 GMT -5
Any feedback would be very much appreciated! The good and the bad.
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Post by Jake Keeton on Sept 29, 2011 20:18:18 GMT -5
You've improved greatly since I last read your work.
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Post by Donald Deruty on Sept 29, 2011 20:23:51 GMT -5
Thanks man, i hope that we can have some fun matches like we did before!
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Post by Johnny Reb on Sept 30, 2011 11:35:55 GMT -5
Ditto what Keeton said. Your RP's have steadily improved ever since you got started, but your most recent one sort of encapsulates all the progress you've made.
Also I found it quite inspiring... it killed my writer's block, so... yeah ;D
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Post by Deleted on Oct 3, 2011 8:32:45 GMT -5
Probably the best work that I can remember seeing from you, Day. I just hope that we see more of it before the deadline tonight.
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