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Post by epitomeofcool on Sept 28, 2011 5:00:36 GMT -5
Any feedback for my first rp here would be appreciated.
Just be gentle lol.
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Post by Logan on Sept 28, 2011 5:16:02 GMT -5
I LOL'd pretty hard during the bit about Logan. That was some smart stuff and very enjoyable to read. I cannot wait to see more from you!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2011 7:12:17 GMT -5
Anyone that bashes Logan gets an A in my book. Keep up the fine writing.
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Post by epitomeofcool on Oct 3, 2011 3:22:23 GMT -5
Rp's 2 and 3 have been posted since I started this thread a few days ago. Anyone have any thoughts? Comments? Advice? Don't be shy now.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 3, 2011 8:27:51 GMT -5
Highly impressive work, Mr. Miles. You started off with a solid intro in your first RP and then did a nice job of fleshing out your character in the next two, while laying a serious verbal smackdown on your opponents. It's refreshing to see a newcomer that really does his homework on his opponents and WCF history.
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Post by epitomeofcool on Oct 3, 2011 13:15:12 GMT -5
Thanks Bobby. I just really want to be entertaining while at the same time staying relative to the match. Hopefully this translates into some success in the future for me.
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Post by epitomeofcool on Oct 16, 2011 21:30:37 GMT -5
Due to unfortunate circumstances I was absent last week, so this week I wanted to come back with some top quality stuff. Hopefully my latest was just that.
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Post by Allen Guiliano on Oct 16, 2011 21:34:44 GMT -5
You have most certainly come back with top quality stuff. Very well done and I am certainly a regular reader of your work. I definitely like your style, your attention to detail and the pure entertainment value.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 17, 2011 9:43:09 GMT -5
Good stuff. If you had posted Part 1 last week I think you would have beaten Speede.
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Post by epitomeofcool on Oct 17, 2011 13:23:02 GMT -5
To Slickie: Thank you very much for the support. I've read about your success in the past and from what I've seen you've got a great deal of respect from the guys, so to see your words of encouragement is a huge deal to me.
To Bobby: Thank you also for the support. Unfortunately, as I said, sometimes you can't avoid outside circumstances in real life and the work suffers. I would have really enjoyed what would have been a competitive contest against Roy, but alas it wasn't meant to be.
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Post by epitomeofcool on Oct 17, 2011 15:53:45 GMT -5
Posted a 2nd RP for no reason other than I was bored and thought it'd be a way of making up for not being around last week. Hopefully it's another good read for you guys.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 17, 2011 16:18:04 GMT -5
Funny, charming, unassuming... delightful.
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Post by epitomeofcool on Oct 17, 2011 16:23:23 GMT -5
Funny, charming, unassuming... delightful. Why thank you. Oh...you were talking about the rp. Whoops!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 24, 2011 19:21:10 GMT -5
The first one you put up for Slam was yet another side splitter. Keep up the good work.
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Post by epitomeofcool on Oct 30, 2011 19:00:09 GMT -5
As I said in the chat box this week was unusually busy for me and it showed. I put a lot of effort into the first roleplay earlier today and ended up leaving myself drained for ideas when it came time to write a second one later on. Hope you guys at least enjoy the first one.
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