Explosion RP #2 feedback

[Shane Borderland]

it sux that i just now realized that its three RPs for PPV's now i dont have the time to RP, so i will probably lose because of that my dault but damn this sux ass, anyways what did you guys think about my latest promo?

[Speede]

Well Shane, I thought your latest was brilliant; it was comical, and had a good balance of trash talking to more humor. That's a good thing dude, and you still have a good chance of winning.

And hitting Bishop in the face with the water from the bottle and framing Kash was rich. I almost died laughing when I read Bishop attacking Kash.

But I'm not even kidding, even having the additional RP up on you, I'm seriously scared right now because of the quality of that RP.

[Shane Borderland]

Well Thanks Speede, i am still worried because i made a rookie mistake lol. Anyways yea im trying something new out adding a little humor in my RP's now. So hope everyone enjoys it. Now would say good luck Speede, but im the one that needs it.

[Speede]

Not really man, you added a third RP that was straight to the point, but still had depth. I mean, a low score on descriptive stuff (surroundings and crap), but it was still good, man. And with that RP you added earlier (the funny one), you still have the upper hand I think. It's like how I forgot to add a third RP back at TTDUP and I noticed Chloe Barnes post one with less than an hour till deadline, then had to draw something up. I still won even though I didn't expect it. I think that's what's gonna happen here, only it'll be you.

[Shane Borderland]

Damnit Speede, just shutup and take the win because of my mistake. Dont argue back with me son, lmao