Thoughts on my Explosion RP

[FPV]

This is quite literally the longest thing i've ever written, and it took a long ass time to make. So please tell me if I did good on it, cause I feel as if this is a really strong RP.

[Jason Cashe]

It's a good promo but I will start with the negatives. You spent more time than needed to make a point on someone else's behalf other than Baines. You talked about Speede a bit more than needed when the past should remain in the past because it helps you ZERO against Baines.

Da Funk who is a rookie has never seen a Shinning Wizard? Where the hell did he fall in love with wrestling at and never see a Shinning Wizard? I like the protege thing, works for some and it seems to be working for you right now. I'd say put more into Baines and less into past opponents including guys from other feds because in all truth if it's not WCF History then nobody outside of you understands it and explaining the whole situation might come off as wasted time. You didn't really waste anytime though so that's just me seeing something and speaking on it.

Overall though it was a good promo, to the point for every topic discussed and you put it to Baines when you finally got around to hitting him up verbally.