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Hi,

Again changed the formatting slightly. But I hope to improve and not hinder it.

Feedback is greatly requested and appreciated guys xx

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Yeah, so in terms of character development and learning more about her in general the two promos were great. I liked the second one a lot more and not because it was longer. It just had more depth.

As far as a promo goes and actual focus on the match/opponent itself, your two promos were lacking in material. You spent almost the entire promo both times focusing on scenery, character development and the description of everything around you.

However, like I said, those three things were excellent in your promos, if those are any indication, you could definitely have an excellent promo if you added more about your opinions on the opponent and/or match that you're to be in.

I am pretty much the opposite with my two characters, Troy Malenko and Gravedigger. I spend little time on description of everything around me and scenery and mainly the bulk of my promos are talking about the opponent and match (plus whatever else WCF-related is on my character(s) mind).

I tend to start out with a lot of description of the scene and all that but by the end, I barely do anything other than straight talk. It's almost like my promos end up being backstage interviews where nothing but talk is going on.

Hope all that helps.

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Thanks - it is muchly appreciated and I had a blonde moment with time zones - where-by I was working on something that was far more match focused, but thought I still had today to post lol.

Feedback is really appreciated though and I always try and apply it next time