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Post by Abel Channing on Dec 10, 2010 0:56:05 GMT -5
Seeing how I'm "new" here in the WCF I figured I'd get some feedback on my first ever Rp ever done here, entitled "Arrival of One..."
I usually don't ask but it's nice to know when your the new guy in a new place. All types of feedback are welcome.
Thanks to those who do give feedback. - Dave
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Post by Allen Guiliano on Dec 13, 2010 0:24:43 GMT -5
Surprised no one has given feedback yet, but I suppose I will be the first. Hard to really list improvements or anything until I see your later work, but I really like the intro RP and think you are off to a great start. It had flow, was easy to read, good use of colors. All things that are essential to quality stuff. Keep it up and I will comment on future stuff when I have the time. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your stuff in the near future.
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Post by Abel Channing on Dec 13, 2010 1:26:58 GMT -5
Hey Thanks, T, Price gave me feedback through the chatbox.
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