Post by Deleted on Dec 1, 2010 5:33:16 GMT -5
Just posted my latest RP and I thought there may be a chance of some confusion over parts.
1. There are two parts of the RP where it goes into a first person type style (the first being in all pink text, the second in all red text). What I was going for was putting you, the reader, in the perspective of two different people during what happened at the end of Slam. In the first one, you are Shannan right after being tossed off the stage and when the attack occurs. The second one, you are Price being forced to watch as Shannan is attacked and what happened afterwards.
What I was trying for was to put you in their mindset during all of this. I wanted to give you an idea of what was going through the minds of Price and Shannan as all of this was happening. It's something I haven't tried before and I have to say it was interesting to do. Hopefully I'll have another opportunity to do something similar in the future.
2. The back and forth conversation toward the end may raise a few eyebrows. The red text is, of course, Price (it's always Price in my rp's). The orange text is the Voices in his head, which if you remember from my last RP, are slowly coming back to light. I tried to do something with this months back in a character development RP series but it got shelved when I won the Hardcore Title. I thought now with all the crazy shit going on in his life it'd be the perfect time for him to have his meltdown. Hope you guys enjoy some truly crazy ass shit!
1. There are two parts of the RP where it goes into a first person type style (the first being in all pink text, the second in all red text). What I was going for was putting you, the reader, in the perspective of two different people during what happened at the end of Slam. In the first one, you are Shannan right after being tossed off the stage and when the attack occurs. The second one, you are Price being forced to watch as Shannan is attacked and what happened afterwards.
What I was trying for was to put you in their mindset during all of this. I wanted to give you an idea of what was going through the minds of Price and Shannan as all of this was happening. It's something I haven't tried before and I have to say it was interesting to do. Hopefully I'll have another opportunity to do something similar in the future.
2. The back and forth conversation toward the end may raise a few eyebrows. The red text is, of course, Price (it's always Price in my rp's). The orange text is the Voices in his head, which if you remember from my last RP, are slowly coming back to light. I tried to do something with this months back in a character development RP series but it got shelved when I won the Hardcore Title. I thought now with all the crazy shit going on in his life it'd be the perfect time for him to have his meltdown. Hope you guys enjoy some truly crazy ass shit!
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