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Post by chinasty on Jun 9, 2010 20:41:18 GMT -5
I know this RP is a little long and descriptive but I was trying to introduce the character as well as RP for the match. For future reference, RP's won't be ssooo long with descriptions but mostly talk. I'm just getting back in the swing of things. What did ya'll think though??
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Post by Jason Cashe on Jun 9, 2010 21:38:28 GMT -5
Maybe I shouldn't be the one giving feedback...Good though, you could make the talking that is mixed in with description a different color too so that people here who like that can catch it better.
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Post by chinasty on Jun 9, 2010 22:00:42 GMT -5
Fo'sho... I think I'll end up going back to my original style of writing though. Not really digging this first person stuff.
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Post by Corey Black on Jun 10, 2010 18:18:20 GMT -5
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