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Post by Donald Deruty on Feb 10, 2010 10:00:10 GMT -5
I feed on RP advise...not really but if you have any please, give me your opinions.
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Post by Jake Keeton on Feb 11, 2010 11:41:38 GMT -5
I think the dialogue was ok, but I noticed there wasn't much mention of the match.
I know I'm new here so my opinion might not matter much but you asked and no one had responded so I figured I would.
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Post by Donald Deruty on Feb 12, 2010 23:52:19 GMT -5
Ok thanks Jake and ill except any advice thanks.
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Post by Seth on Feb 17, 2010 23:13:48 GMT -5
You're very easily the most improved wrestler in WCF. And I liked how your two RPs told one big story.
The only advice I have for you is that I feel like the fight between D-Day and Paul at the end should have been a little longer and a little more descriptive, your two roleplays lead up to that moment and it could've been a little "bigger," thats all.
But good job!
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Post by Donald Deruty on Feb 18, 2010 18:24:11 GMT -5
Ok thanks Seth like i always say i love the advise. thanks
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Post by Deleted on Feb 18, 2010 18:49:34 GMT -5
I really like what you're doing, D-Day. You're getting better every week. I agree with Seth, more description would help in certain parts, especially when you've been building to a climax. Overall, keep up the good work. You're kicking butt!
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Post by Donald Deruty on Feb 18, 2010 19:57:31 GMT -5
thanks Cairo, i really appriciate it i will definatly take that advice an use it thanks
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Post by Donald Deruty on Feb 25, 2010 18:36:50 GMT -5
I am starting a little new RP thing i will ahve it up anytime please tell me whta you think. it is suspost to me a little journal, like i said just trying something new for a change.
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Post by Donald Deruty on Feb 25, 2010 18:48:48 GMT -5
RP up check it out, tell me what you think.
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Post by Torture on Feb 25, 2010 19:19:14 GMT -5
I like it a lot more!
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Post by Donald Deruty on Feb 25, 2010 19:42:49 GMT -5
Thanks Tort, do you think that i should keep i tlike i have it with the dates or put it like a real entry like from first person, or third witch ever it is. lol
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Post by Donald Deruty on Feb 25, 2010 19:43:15 GMT -5
Anybody thoughts on RP, keep with dates or etc.
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Post by Torture on Feb 25, 2010 22:54:22 GMT -5
Fill it out like a blog. That would be best. It would fit you too. Days Blog, or Days Journal. As Days Go By. LOL.
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Post by Allen Guiliano on Feb 25, 2010 23:44:26 GMT -5
Im with Torture. After reading the RP, I like the blog idea. However I disagree with "As Days Go By", thats just silly  |
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Post by Torture on Feb 26, 2010 0:00:17 GMT -5
LOL, of course it's silly. I just like the blog idea. I'd even put multiple entries if you needed length as well. Make the dates accurate to outside reality, and show true emotion. I believe it would work.
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Post by Donald Deruty on Feb 26, 2010 17:30:23 GMT -5
Haha thats funny Tort and thanks for the comments, i really appriciate it i will definatly make a blog. Thanks for everything, if you guys ever think that anything i do you like pleas tell me, I will try to get one up this week, to practise for next week.
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Post by Donald Deruty on Feb 27, 2010 21:39:46 GMT -5
OK, RP up any comments, any thoughts?
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Post by Donald Deruty on Feb 28, 2010 9:54:58 GMT -5
third RP up check out give me your thoughts
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Post by Donald Deruty on Mar 3, 2010 18:00:37 GMT -5
RP up for Slam check it out and give thoughts
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Post by Donald Deruty on Mar 17, 2010 20:12:30 GMT -5
I have been down on my game and i hope this RP have made it up, please tell me what you think
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