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Post by Davey Ortega on Jan 11, 2010 14:20:41 GMT -5
Your good.
My only regret is being dead tired and coming of a terrible week. If I wasn't so tired and was actually in a creative mood I would of rped much better. Kudos sir, Kudos.
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Post by Corey Black on Jan 11, 2010 14:29:28 GMT -5
I want to say that whatever I say in my RP, I don't actually mean. Because it's brutal, even for me. I like reading your stuff, sir. I really do.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 11, 2010 17:48:47 GMT -5
yay Vampiro
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Post by Seth on Jan 11, 2010 19:03:14 GMT -5
Greenfever, your roleplays this week were really good I thought. Your stuff is always well thought out and well written everything, but this week they just really stood out from your normal stuff, in a good way. Good job.
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Post by Torture on Jan 12, 2010 4:13:28 GMT -5
I didn't read them. Your RPs scare me. Nightmares. Cold sweat nightmares. Blood shot eyes. Puking everywhere. I'm sorry. Forgive me?
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Post by Seth on Jan 12, 2010 23:46:33 GMT -5
my favorite part of that was "Puking everywhere."
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Post by Torture on Jan 13, 2010 0:33:00 GMT -5
My favorite part was when he put candy into my pocket.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 26, 2010 10:06:29 GMT -5
skimmed through the latest and thought I might throw up. That's probably what you're going for though, so, thumbs up!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 8, 2010 23:06:57 GMT -5
No one's mentioned anything about how all your RPs now are in the second-person so I thought I'd post to commend you for doing something different.
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Post by Seth on Jun 7, 2010 15:06:19 GMT -5
My advice on that: Say with the old way of doing things, you would have done two long RPs with Greenfever's story. Instead just split each of those two up into four and spread them out over a longer period of time, instead of cutting back on the story itself.
If thats possible, anyway. It might not be, but it might be something to think about.
I don't want to end up stifling creativity too much so I'm not sure of any other ways around it. Hm.
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Post by Jason Cashe on Jun 7, 2010 18:31:33 GMT -5
I think you could become a top guy in a short period of time. You write very well and the novel setup works for few in my opinion. I just don't like the novel style much because it doesn't say that your being recorded but it's more of you telling the story yourself as if it had already happened. In descriptive parts anyway. To me an rp is currently being recorded not something previous unless stated otherwise. However you use it well and because you use the color scheme it helps make it easier to read so I cannot say nothing against your writing. Good stuff.
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Post by Jason Cashe on Jun 7, 2010 21:14:16 GMT -5
Yeah and it works just fine. The focusing more on storyline is good though cause it's truly what gives you points in judging in my opinion. Styles vary and some I've known judged off preferred styles but if the plot points in the rp are there and it written well for the style used then you will always be solid. I've agreed with the judging this past week so I am pleased with how KinkySeth judges rps. I would actually love to rp against someone like you so that says something cause I don't like rping against garbage.
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Post by Jason Cashe on Jun 7, 2010 23:38:07 GMT -5
Heh. It was a compliment...I wouldn't have commented on someone and lied to them so..
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Post by Doc Henry on Jul 12, 2010 19:15:22 GMT -5
O prob, good RP...
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Post by olivertristian on Jul 13, 2010 0:37:11 GMT -5
A little crazy? Mental even? Not too many times I see a looney headed character that actually keeps me reading. Would like to see more from you being the Champion.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 14, 2011 10:54:59 GMT -5
I hate how good you are. No but seriously, every week you continue to put out high quality rp's that make us all want to keep reading. Great job.  |
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