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derden Newbie Posts: 15	Pretty Obv Here Sept 15, 2009 20:31:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by derden on Sept 15, 2009 20:31:18 GMT -5 Like the way u guys actually give constuctive critism, not just ya good, it was great that kinda shit... but ya first tme in ohhh... five years ive done this, so lemme kno wat i can do better

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I thought it was very well done for an introduction RP. Was easy to read with the colors that you used for distinction purposes, you got the demeaner of your character across and you used the proper interviewer. Only thing I could think of that might have added to it was the back story of your character but something tells me you might be saving that for another RP.

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Post by Allen Guiliano on Sept 15, 2009 20:42:36 GMT -5

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