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Post by bigtimejerks on Sept 5, 2009 0:51:20 GMT -5
Give it to me on Scammers.
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Post by Seth on Sept 5, 2009 11:39:12 GMT -5
I think you guys would benefit from using color. Its a pain in the ass, but it really helps, I'd say.
Your writing is overall good, I'd recommend seeing if you can get some kind of story going in addition to the "trash talking the opponents" part, but yeah! Not bad.
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