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Post by Seth on Aug 16, 2009 17:28:03 GMT -5
That would be the example, I think it helps a lot.
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Post by Doc Henry on Aug 16, 2009 17:40:09 GMT -5
ok, cool thanks for the suggestion, was just trying to add some look to it...  |
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Post by Doc Henry on Aug 16, 2009 17:40:33 GMT -5
if it helps I can change the orange back....
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Post by Torture on Aug 16, 2009 20:44:00 GMT -5
Your newest RP, Doc, is pretty damn good. It has a style to it, keeps on track, it's an opener and closer, like it should and I really think the character is coming out now. Pretty damn good if I say so myself. You're in rhythm and it's showing.
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Post by Allen Guiliano on Aug 17, 2009 10:44:52 GMT -5
I agree 100% with Torture. I was quite impressed with what you put together this week. It was a nice read and lets me know how you want your character to be viewed and how he feels/thinks/acts. Great job and keep it up. Roleplays like that are what make for great matches.
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Post by Doc Henry on Aug 29, 2009 19:29:28 GMT -5
I know it was short, but I'm gonna expand on it. Got a few thoughts running through me head, so I just got to the point on this one.....
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Post by Doc Henry on Aug 30, 2009 16:32:27 GMT -5
well if the last of the three don't count oh, well it was meant to be a fun thing anyhow....
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Post by Logan on Aug 30, 2009 21:09:39 GMT -5
well if the last of the three don't count oh, well it was meant to be a fun thing anyhow.... That's what she said! No-no-no, your RP's always serve my eyes with a fun read-- an enjoyable read-- an-- it's hard to continue without thinking of sex. .. hard.. o.o The same can be said that reading Doc H's work is the equivalent of having sex and/or thinking about it, and obviously.. sex, anyway you put it(MMMM), is a good thing. |
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Post by Doc Henry on Sept 3, 2009 18:33:51 GMT -5
Had some fun on this one, see who gets the reference...... lol Superfans, if that gives you any ideas feel free....
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Post by Doc Henry on Sept 14, 2009 16:42:20 GMT -5
Did this on on the cell, sorry about it being so short....... :-P... ya'll get over it..... lol
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Post by Seth on Sept 14, 2009 17:57:05 GMT -5
Its cool, i'm always amazed by people who take the time to RP from cellphones, so no problem.
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Post by Doc Henry on Sept 24, 2009 18:13:16 GMT -5
Well first is up.... we'll see where go from here....
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Post by Torture on Sept 24, 2009 18:20:27 GMT -5
If I could add something in here, and I'm only adding it to you Doc, because I feel your character is so much more than you're giving us, but here I go.
Length man. It feels like you either have no time, or you can't find the right groove for your character. If you don't have time, can't get time from real life, obviously, I'm not down talking that, but if you have the time and this is what you give us, I have a feeling like you're in a rut/crossroads with this character, or you just can't find the groove to get going.
I feel your character is def. a heavy hitter in WCF and the way you (And Reb) write out RPs is something I look forward to every week. I def. think and can see your character being a big time player here in WCF, I just feel the potential upside is not being used enough.
Sorry if you think I'm dogging you because I came at you, but that's not the case! I love Doc Henry, and want him to be a force to be reckoned with.
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Post by Doc Henry on Sept 24, 2009 18:24:37 GMT -5
No problem, but yeah i rut sometimes, it's a matter of either plain ol' block, or being unable to get what's in my mind out.... sometimes both... |
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Post by Seth on Sept 24, 2009 18:28:14 GMT -5
Doc I think you'd benefit if maybe every week you thought of some short story Doc Henry is involved in. Like, instead of just sitting around talking about the match, theres other people in a bar and they try and fight him, or some girl hits on him, or something like that. Your "talking about the wrestling storylines" part is good, albeit short, so you just need some way to expand on things, I think.
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Post by Doc Henry on Sept 24, 2009 18:29:52 GMT -5
like my beating up on hank brown went....?
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Post by Torture on Sept 24, 2009 18:31:14 GMT -5
I think you need something to throw in, to diversify it and obviously add in content/length.
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Post by Doc Henry on Sept 24, 2009 18:33:12 GMT -5
hmmm....... k......... *thinks
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Post by Doc Henry on Sept 24, 2009 19:22:04 GMT -5
I must say though I do like the way Doc is developing as it comes to his resilliancy... Kinda HBKish in that reguards is my goal.... |
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Post by Doc Henry on Sept 27, 2009 8:44:35 GMT -5
Two down, last one up later, if I get time....
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