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Post by deangelo on Mar 10, 2009 18:08:51 GMT -5
I posted it a few days back, and I really liked how it turned out. Thoughts?
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Post by Jack of Blades on Mar 10, 2009 19:26:56 GMT -5
Yeah, a really good read. I liked the style as well. Short but succinct.
Lacked a little on the character side of things but overall, I really liked it.
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Post by logan on Mar 10, 2009 21:15:22 GMT -5
less words more hotdog
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Post by Seth on Mar 10, 2009 21:27:38 GMT -5
I thought it was pretty good. Well written, pretty much around the perfect length, interesting enough for a character I don't know anything about.. thumbs up.
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Post by logan on Mar 10, 2009 21:43:23 GMT -5
I thought it was pretty good. Well written, pretty much around the perfect length[/b], interesting enough for a character I don't know anything about.. thumbs up.[/quote] that just aroused me.
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