Post by logan on Mar 7, 2009 14:52:49 GMT -5
If you haven't read Jack's "Mt. Van Der Dood", I please encourage you to do so.. it might seem like a lot at first (to you lazy readers) but it's easy to get into the story and the payoff is very.. very awarding. Below is my two cents of the RP, more or less, it's spoilers.. I'd hate to ruin it, so, if you haven't read "Mt. Van Der Dood" yet than don't scroll below.
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if not for the mention of reading my RP first, i wouldn't have burst out laughing quarter of the way through of reading your RP. I saw where it was going at that point when the explorer made it clear he'd be climbing mountain van der blood, and then I knew he'd end up seeing this fat naked guy wacking it..
BUT.. what made me even laugh harder was his actual journey to get to the top, finding half eaten hotdogs, losing his entire crew of men, fighting lions, it's like his desire, his goal in life was to reach the top of van der dood.. and in complete disappointment, when he finally makes it to the top, when he really fulfills his dream, LOL!
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if not for the mention of reading my RP first, i wouldn't have burst out laughing quarter of the way through of reading your RP. I saw where it was going at that point when the explorer made it clear he'd be climbing mountain van der blood, and then I knew he'd end up seeing this fat naked guy wacking it..
BUT.. what made me even laugh harder was his actual journey to get to the top, finding half eaten hotdogs, losing his entire crew of men, fighting lions, it's like his desire, his goal in life was to reach the top of van der dood.. and in complete disappointment, when he finally makes it to the top, when he really fulfills his dream, LOL!
