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Post by Stephen Singh on Oct 1, 2016 10:49:38 GMT -5
So I just posted my second War RP and I feel like it got away from me. If anybody reads it, I wouldn't mind some feedback. I sort of lost the thread towards the end I think. I'm kind of strapped for time and really just felt like it needed to get done. I'm partially wondering if that came across way too obviously or not.
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