|
Post by Cliff of Doom on Sept 30, 2016 2:47:16 GMT -5
|
|
|
Post by Fluffy Kitten on Sept 30, 2016 3:18:27 GMT -5
great except for one detail. Bates doesn't cuss .. ever.
meow
|
|
|
Post by Cliff of Doom on Sept 30, 2016 4:58:59 GMT -5
I don't even remember what I wrote LOL.
|
|
|
Post by Joey Flash on Sept 30, 2016 5:15:42 GMT -5
I thought it was brilliant.
Thorough, hard hitting and making the reader root for Cliff. Nothing in the way of critique.
|
|
|
Post by Thomas Uriel Bates on Sept 30, 2016 12:05:48 GMT -5
It was good as the Duck said, but the Cat is right too; Bates doesn't cuss except in certain extreme situations.
Good read, and really want to see what happens next.
|
|
Lilith
Newbie
Cancer
Lol
Posts: 60
|
Post by Lilith on Sept 30, 2016 12:30:53 GMT -5
It was good as the Duck said, but the Cat is right too Best freaking feedback ever right hurr lmfao
|
|
|
Post by Fluffy Kitten on Sept 30, 2016 13:29:46 GMT -5
It was good as the Duck said, but the Cat is right too Best freaking feedback ever right hurr lmfao
|
|
|
Post by Thomas Uriel Bates on Sept 30, 2016 14:18:17 GMT -5
I think this cat just eliminated Joey Flash from War...
|
|
|
Post by Kevin Bishop on Sept 30, 2016 17:11:10 GMT -5
I liked Cliff before you posted your WAR rp...... Now i fucking love Cliff, you bastard lol. No, I loved your down to earth approach and your shoot was on point, very well done.
|
|