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Post by Dionysus on Sept 29, 2016 23:14:11 GMT -5
Because I have a genuine curiosity...and because I feel I need to ask this question.
I want your feedback on me. How I'm doing, what I ought to be doing, etc.
Don't just say "Oh you're doing fine." Its a bullshit answer. Actually give me something to work with.
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Post by jasoncash on Sept 30, 2016 8:31:19 GMT -5
I liked the gladiator bit. Think you went away from it too fast
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Post by Gemini Battle on Sept 30, 2016 8:58:21 GMT -5
Oh, you're doing just fine.
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Post by Gemini Battle on Sept 30, 2016 9:03:05 GMT -5
I PMed you not too long ago with my thoughts. I think you're taking steps in the right direction, but you really need to find that direction adn take it to the extreme. You can't be too outlandish but you CAN be too subtle. and as far as format goes. I don't like Center alignment dialogue as you're doing it. If you're going to do center align it should be like this IMO Dion Derrr...I'm an urban gladiator- herderder... where's my underwear? You can use that!
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Post by Dionysus on Sept 30, 2016 9:05:51 GMT -5
I'm going to keep using the Gladiator gimmick. The Ringmaster stuff is more of a way to create tension between the two characters as he keeps trying to sway him toward the circus realm.
I do like your formatting, Gemini; reads more like a script. I'll incorporate that.
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Post by Gemini Battle on Sept 30, 2016 9:07:37 GMT -5
Yea but the content is key. That should be his tag line.
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Post by Gemini Battle on Sept 30, 2016 9:08:17 GMT -5
Every time dion steps into the ring the whole crowd chants 'herderder...where's my underwear!'
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Post by Gemini Battle on Sept 30, 2016 9:08:29 GMT -5
Obvs jk
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Post by Dionysus on Sept 30, 2016 9:12:03 GMT -5
Every time dion steps into the ring the whole crowd chants 'herderder...where's my underwear!' I'm still working on a crowd chant, actually. In the past, I've used "Battle Metal" from my entrance music, since it sticks out.
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Post by Kevin Bishop on Sept 30, 2016 9:39:14 GMT -5
ooooo it just hit me brother... Just as in Ring of Honor how they have the metal signs around the barricade... The fans pound on the signs to cheer on their favorites... What if when you wrestled there were Spartan like shields lined up for the fans to pound on or something... Just spit balling here.
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Post by Dionysus on Sept 30, 2016 9:59:06 GMT -5
ooooo it just hit me brother... Just as in Ring of Honor how they have the metal signs around the barricade... The fans pound on the signs to cheer on their favorites... What if when you wrestled there were Spartan like shields lined up for the fans to pound on or something... Just spit balling here. Hmm...maybe...are the barricades lined with a sheet of metal?
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Post by Psychopomp on Sept 30, 2016 10:40:38 GMT -5
ooooo it just hit me brother... Just as in Ring of Honor how they have the metal signs around the barricade... The fans pound on the signs to cheer on their favorites... What if when you wrestled there were Spartan like shields lined up for the fans to pound on or something... Just spit balling here. Hmm...maybe...are the barricades lined with a sheet of metal? Not sure but i know that seth would appreciate an increase in merch sale if you add a shield to the WCF shop!
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Post by Kevin Bishop on Sept 30, 2016 10:58:09 GMT -5
The Brotherhood will fund it just for you Dion.
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Post by Dionysus on Sept 30, 2016 11:35:35 GMT -5
Hmm...maybe...are the barricades lined with a sheet of metal? Not sure but i know that seth would appreciate an increase in merch sale if you add a shield to the WCF shop! Plastic shields for the kids; replicas for the adults.
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Post by Psychopomp on Sept 30, 2016 11:57:46 GMT -5
Not sure but i know that seth would appreciate an increase in merch sale if you add a shield to the WCF shop! Plastic shields for the kids; replicas for the adults. Which one would Pomp get?
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Post by Dionysus on Sept 30, 2016 13:27:53 GMT -5
Plastic shields for the kids; replicas for the adults. Which one would Pomp get? Which one would Pomp want?
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