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Post by Shay McKay on Sept 25, 2016 10:29:21 GMT -5
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Post by jasoncash on Sept 25, 2016 15:24:44 GMT -5
Was decent. I'm a fan of writing out accents though. If you read mines, you'd notice that you read how Cash sounds. Picked up on some of that in yours. Good work. I'd price together a few scenes though.
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Post by Shay McKay on Sept 25, 2016 15:33:15 GMT -5
Was decent. I'm a fan of writing out accents though. If you read mines, you'd notice that you read how Cash sounds. Picked up on some of that in yours. Good work. I'd price together a few scenes though. Thanks! My roleplays for the moment are a bit short, as I don't have a lot to go by. But I can guarantee after a month or so here I'll have more to write about.
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Post by Lilith on Sept 25, 2016 15:37:31 GMT -5
I really enjoyed it it's great to see newbies jump straight in like you have keep up the good work!
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Post by Shay McKay on Sept 25, 2016 15:38:25 GMT -5
I really enjoyed it it's great to see newbies jump straight in like you have keep up the good work! Thank you!
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