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Post by Cliff of Doom on Sept 10, 2016 12:03:23 GMT -5
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Post by Thomas Uriel Bates on Sept 10, 2016 13:04:06 GMT -5
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Lilith
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Post by Lilith on Sept 10, 2016 14:08:47 GMT -5
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Post by Cormack MacNeill on Sept 10, 2016 14:43:32 GMT -5
I really liked it.
You weaved a shoot in amongst what was essentially an ordinary day. It's a very readable style.
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