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Post by Cliff of Doom on Sept 3, 2016 2:02:00 GMT -5
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Post by Kevin Bishop on Sept 3, 2016 8:10:56 GMT -5
First and foremost I want to apologize for thinking of your character in the light that I did without actually reading your work... I read a book by the title with you and I'm happy to say I was waaaaaaaay off. I didn't read your first rp for your first multi man match, but I did read this rp you wanted feedback on.
I love that your character is grounded in the real world and that you have interaction with your wife and I thought it was a smart move to look up your opponents on youtube and what not. It's the same approach that writers do in horror movies when the character wants to find out how to stop the evil entity trying to kill them. I feel like I can really get behind Cliff of Doom lol it may take me a bit to really get behind the name but I truly like your character so in time I'm sure it'll grow on me. You have some great talent at writing brother, I'm looking forward to see what's next for you.
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Post by Gemini Battle on Sept 3, 2016 8:15:55 GMT -5
It's missing my favorite character, Anthony.
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Post by Cliff of Doom on Sept 3, 2016 9:24:59 GMT -5
First and foremost I want to apologize for thinking of your character in the light that I did without actually reading your work... I read a book by the title with you and I'm happy to say I was waaaaaaaay off. I didn't read your first rp for your first multi man match, but I did read this rp you wanted feedback on. I love that your character is grounded in the real world and that you have interaction with your wife and I thought it was a smart move to look up your opponents on youtube and what not. It's the same approach that writers do in horror movies when the character wants to find out how to stop the evil entity trying to kill them. I feel like I can really get behind Cliff of Doom lol it may take me a bit to really get behind the name but I truly like your character so in time I'm sure it'll grow on me. You have some great talent at writing brother, I'm looking forward to see what's next for you. Thank you.
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Post by Cliff of Doom on Sept 3, 2016 9:26:56 GMT -5
It's missing my favorite character, Anthony. Anthony is a guest star. He's not in the main credits.
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