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Post by Corey Black on Aug 19, 2016 16:51:47 GMT -5
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Post by Sarah Twilight on Aug 19, 2016 17:21:31 GMT -5
You already know that I loved this series in it's entirety. As far as critiquing them?
They were straight to the point and classic Corey Black. This was a day after day thing so I don't think there needed to be any more than there was. The use of the seven deadly since was genius, and each sin chosen for each opponent fit perfectly. The delivery was consistent for who Corey Black is ... just in the fact that your first two opponents ... who are relatively new to WCF, Black did not diretly address himself, but rather Nikki Venus did the talking.
That directly feels like "you aren't on my level." because Corey wouldn't bother with it himself.
The slow build with Nikki and how she bit by bit pushed toward that payoff of Creeping Death was perfect and to carry that through this series as a story within story while RPing daily for a week ... very impressive.
My only complaint is that I didn't get to see an RP for Wrath haha. But seriously, just amazing stuff!
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Post by Jeff Purse on Aug 24, 2016 9:26:14 GMT -5
Terrible nonsense. King of wrestlers? More like King of Terrible Nonsense.
Yabba Dabba mah brotha
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