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Post by Thomas Uriel Bates on Aug 18, 2016 2:17:26 GMT -5
Alright, so I've been finding it a challenge to do 2,000 Word RPs for the TV title. I'm wanting a little feedback on how I've been doing so far. Each one is 2,000 words, as I've been trying to make it exactly 2,000 for the title. ChancesSturgisValidation
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Post by Gemini Battle on Aug 18, 2016 4:48:28 GMT -5
Without going into too much detail I will say this
Your strongest point in writing is character development and scene description. In these short rps that may have to suffer for shoot...
Or does it?
They way we've always planned out rps as DRG is
Cd
Shoot
Cd
Shoot
What you are going to need to do is shoot while doing cd and add that killer scene description that puts us in the tavern or at sturgeons or wherever bates is.
It's one scene role plays. Think of a way to push your character forward but also shoot. You don't want to shoot exclusively bc then your character shows no direction. That's what I've seen in your rps. Brief setting then 'let me talk about my opponents'.
Just my 2 cents.
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Post by Lilith on Aug 18, 2016 8:36:07 GMT -5
Gem is really on the money
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Post by Thomas Uriel Bates on Aug 18, 2016 10:29:12 GMT -5
I had a feeling about that. In these roleplays I have in my maps Character Development, but seem to always need to leave it off due to my shoot. My next one I may cut my shoot down about half and try to show the character development again.
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Post by Henry Spearman on Aug 18, 2016 10:32:48 GMT -5
I just posted a roleplay for my math that came in at around 1800 words. I am trying to keep them all there as i intend on chasing your title at some point and I feel the most comfortable writing in this range. Maybe take a look at it if you want an idea for mixing CD and shoot in together. I am not saying im the best at it but i feel this roleplay may do a decent job of it
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