Logan/Ragnal match?

[Mike Ragnal]

Since I consider that one of my best writings in my efed history, I was wondering what everyone here thought about it? Good for a new guy, or too long for a midcard match?>>;

[Jack of Blades]

My first PPV match was sixteen pages long so I thought it was a pretty cool read but you know, that's me.

[Seth]

Perfect length, well written, can't get much better.

My only problem was that you didn't write any commentary and I had to do it myself, which wasn't a lot of work or anything but matches turn out better when the original writer does the commentary himself IMO.

[Mike Ragnal]

Thanks for that, Seth.

All of my matches since starting in 2005 have had no commentary, so learning to work it into the matches has been hard, but the next time I write a match, I'll be sure to work Shannan and them into it.

(Not bitching or anything, just being honest here. >_>)

[logan]

Well written, and good match Mike.

[Seth]

Of course, I understand. It isn't really difficult, you'll get the hang of it fast.

[Corey Black]

I HATE commentary.