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Post by mainevent on Jul 25, 2016 18:46:26 GMT -5
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Post by Chief Tom-O-Hawk on Jul 26, 2016 1:18:03 GMT -5
I like the whole crazy and adrenaline angle. Good start. Pad it with a little length, work on that gradually so you don't take on too much at once. Or you could work on it a little each day and just post it on Sunday like many do around here. You've avoided large blocks of text, which keeps the format looking clean, good job.
Some guys here do posts that will fill 8-10 screens, though most stick to around 4-6. I'm a casual type, so 2-3 works for me (on my screen, yours may be different). My heavy competitive posting days are long behind me. I'll be watching, seeing how you improve over the next month or so and seeing what kind of ideas you put into your posts.
Background/scenery might help, just don't go overboard describing things.
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Post by Chief Tom-O-Hawk on Jul 26, 2016 1:21:08 GMT -5
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Post by mainevent on Jul 26, 2016 7:12:36 GMT -5
Thanks mate. I will take a look at that 👍
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