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Post by johnnycraven on Jul 15, 2007 3:04:42 GMT -5
OK. Let's have it. Bring on the feedback.
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Post by Davey Ortega on Jul 15, 2007 3:10:16 GMT -5
I liked it, nice flow.
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Post by Corey Black on Jul 15, 2007 13:18:16 GMT -5
Aside from the useless alcohol, it was very nice. I'd probably dock some kind of point, though.
Alcohol is used WAY too liberally here, and it isn't something a character would do.
"Stone Cold and Sandman, CD!"
That's beer, and they didn't even drink it, everyone!
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Post by Steve Catt on Jul 15, 2007 13:25:36 GMT -5
Scott Hall, CD!
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Post by Corey Black on Jul 15, 2007 13:29:44 GMT -5
It's just something an athlete wouldn't do, especially on television or whatever we're seeing this on. :-\
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Post by Steve Catt on Jul 15, 2007 13:29:59 GMT -5
I was just kidding
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Post by Corey Black on Jul 15, 2007 13:32:55 GMT -5
I know.
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Post by daveyboone on Jul 15, 2007 15:11:08 GMT -5
I liked the fact that you didn't bring an ice chest in and drink beer this time too and the water thing was a good idea. Also, we always do rps in the backstage area or in hotels and stuff like that, the fact that you actually did your rp in the empty WCF arena was WAY cool. It was a different scene for Craven, yet not one he's not familiar with either. If we aren't having Slam this coming week, then this rp should go to the triple threat match in my opinion. (if it is a triple threat match) The best rp you've done in the past 3 weeks! Very creative and keep up the great work! "Great job"
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Post by Torture on Jul 15, 2007 15:49:08 GMT -5
It was creative. It was good too. It flowed nicely, I think someone said that. I've read a few RPs that have taken place in empty arenas and shit. It gets old. Craven had a nice new twist on it though. I liked this RP more than I've liked the past.
I do agree on the Professional Athlete stuff. If you're drunk and high, theres no way you could beat someone whose coming to kick your ass.
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Post by johnnycraven on Jul 15, 2007 18:07:21 GMT -5
No more alcohol huh? No More Alcohol Make JOhnny Craven Very Angry!!!! lol, I'm just messin, ok..no more alcohol
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Post by Seth on Jul 15, 2007 18:10:32 GMT -5
make that your gimmick, that youre trying to quit alcohol so youre pissed off all the damn time
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Post by johnnycraven on Jul 15, 2007 18:17:55 GMT -5
I could see that
I'll see what I can do.
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Post by Torture on Jul 15, 2007 18:29:06 GMT -5
Oh god. lmao.
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Post by logan on Jul 16, 2007 16:08:14 GMT -5
make that your gimmick, that youre trying to quit alcohol so youre pissed off all the damn time I bet Seth is on the WWE creative writing team.
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Post by Corey Black on Jul 16, 2007 16:20:37 GMT -5
Seth Russo.
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Post by Torture on Jul 16, 2007 17:07:33 GMT -5
Russo was bomb. Stfu.
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Post by Corey Black on Jul 16, 2007 17:09:04 GMT -5
Seth Gonz0.
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Post by Torture on Jul 16, 2007 17:56:17 GMT -5
There we go.
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Post by Steve Catt on Jul 16, 2007 19:52:07 GMT -5
I lol'ed
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