tvo
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Post by tvo on Feb 27, 2007 19:18:54 GMT -5
Hey guys, just throwing it out there. I came from a time when RPing meant that it had to part of a story line and mean something down the road. I dunno, my shit, I know needs work, but I just need to hear some feedback.
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Post by Corey Black on Feb 27, 2007 19:23:06 GMT -5
I agree with the first part, storylines and meaning something.
Second part? No idea.
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Post by Seth on Feb 27, 2007 19:45:34 GMT -5
Ongoing debate here, I guess, but no, the RPs don't neccesarily have to be part of the storyline. They can be used as character development.
As for your stuff, I'm liking it. Thumbs up so far. The writing itself is acceptable, the only advice I can give is to find a way to make them more entertaining or interesting.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 27, 2007 19:53:54 GMT -5
Did you mean to say An Honest Question because Ah Honest Question is a little weird looking.
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Post by daveyboone on Feb 28, 2007 16:37:09 GMT -5
*rolls eyes* Ah honest Question looks good to me!  lol TVO, Seth is right....create writing just need something a little bit more entertaining and interesting to read. |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2007 17:13:37 GMT -5
Who was it who did that song "An Honest Mistake"? It was kind of like The Killers but it wasn't them.
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Post by Steve Catt on Feb 28, 2007 17:42:51 GMT -5
The Bravery
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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2007 17:56:36 GMT -5
Thanks
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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2007 18:40:38 GMT -5
I could imagine Seth bouncing around to that song in his underpants.
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Post by Danny Vice on Feb 28, 2007 19:39:26 GMT -5
I could imagine Seth bouncing around to that song in his underpants. this is probably a quote of the year candidate as well |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2007 20:02:33 GMT -5
It's just a thought that I had. I don't do it for awards or publicity.
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Post by Seth on Feb 28, 2007 20:47:37 GMT -5
People think about me in my underwear a lot. I understand.
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Post by Skyler Striker on Mar 1, 2007 2:53:16 GMT -5
People think about me in my underwear a lot. I understand. They prefer that to thinking of you without underpants. |
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Post by Lawnmower Jones on Mar 1, 2007 20:56:47 GMT -5
Seth would be better than Tom Cruise in Risky Business.
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Post by Steve Catt on Mar 1, 2007 20:59:00 GMT -5
Oh big deal. I'm better looking than Tom Cruise.
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Post by Lawnmower Jones on Mar 1, 2007 21:35:26 GMT -5
Well, I'm not saying he's better looking...I'm just saying he could probably dance around in his around better...
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Post by Steve Catt on Mar 1, 2007 21:47:31 GMT -5
And that's not hard to do.
No offense to Seth's dancing skills which I can't comment on as I have not seen them.
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Post by Seth on Mar 1, 2007 22:09:00 GMT -5
I have none.
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Post by Steve Catt on Mar 1, 2007 23:01:39 GMT -5
I might as well have none. I mean maybe I don't, I don't know. I once made a promise to never dance and I never have. Some people think I'm being ridiculous. I think I just take my promises seriously.
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lol TVO, Seth is right....create writing just need something a little bit more entertaining and interesting to read.
