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Post by Thunder on Apr 5, 2007 16:44:23 GMT -5
I think it turned out pretty well. Thoughts?
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Post by Danny Vice on Apr 5, 2007 16:47:54 GMT -5
Honestly, you've written better before. The description was great, I just felt the dialogue was a little more bland than you usually do. However, it certainly can set the tone for the RPs to come, so good work on that aspect of it.
I'm sure it's gonna be a good fight for the three of us, so i'm excited for it.
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