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Post by Henry Spearman on Jun 12, 2016 9:18:47 GMT -5
Hey guys. I went in a completely different direction for this weeks shoot. Was just wondering what people thought of it. I was having trouble coming up with a true shoot so i thought i would try and go with a comedic route. I have always enjoyed writing comedy but it tough o do with Neforian. Figured id give it a shot
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Post by Deleted on Jun 12, 2016 15:07:35 GMT -5
I found it quite humorous. The mannerisms that the characters had were a little over the top in comparison to what I would perceive Captain WCF and Bad News Benson being like if they were to not be professional wrestlers. I liked it quite a bit.'
The first half of the RP was great. I think even the most casual of readers could be entertained by it, while taking valuable lessons from the message it presents. It was disappointing that the ending was how it was, but it had a reality to it that as much as you hate to see it, there are still ignorant people out there that'll do whatever it takes to make people feel bad for who they are. I think there is a lot of people here who probably feel that way in some aspect of their life.
Overall I thought it was a great roleplay. You were able to mix dramatics with comedic efforts, and you should be able to find an audience that'll enjoy both worlds.
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