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Post by Steve Catt on Dec 30, 2007 9:19:07 GMT -5
I feel that my latest RP is quite an accomplishment for me. Perhaps not of the same artistic magnitude as C.D.'s latest but I think it's fun to read and it was certainly fun to write.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 30, 2007 11:54:31 GMT -5
I enjoyed reading both of Steve Carr's works this week. There were a couple of things that stood out to me. First of all I like the way that Steve Carr sets the scene. Carr describes what's going on in a succinct and informative manner without being heavy handed with useless minutia. That's very important. Every bit of description has a point, there's nothing forced, there's no wasted movement.
Secondly, Steve Carr's dialogue is a cutting and scathing indictment of not only WCF but also society as a whole. It reminds me of Bret Hart's promos when he was at the height of his power and influence before the Montreal Screwjob. The truth hurts and a lot of people can't handle it, but the truth is and always will be the truth. I take my hat off to Steve Carr for telling it like it is. At times Carr injects humor into his diatribes, but that doesn't quite soften the blow when he's handing somebody their balls in a brown paper bag.
Overall I thought it was a highly stimulating pair of roleplays from Steve Carr. The basic format is meat and potatoes, but Carr keeps things fresh with his unique brand of wit and cynicism. I look forward with great anticipation to future posts from Steve Carr as we progress forward with this inaugural WCF Classic.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 30, 2007 11:57:59 GMT -5
But yes CD's was also very good. In fact I think CD may have edged Biohazard for RP of the week honors.
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Post by Corey Black on Dec 30, 2007 12:03:29 GMT -5
lolz. I've been so fucking busy this week. :-\
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Post by Deleted on Dec 30, 2007 12:40:40 GMT -5
I legitimately marked out for the "A steel one" line. That was awesome.
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Post by Steve Catt on Dec 31, 2007 8:44:44 GMT -5
I love you guys.
I just noticed though that I made a massive error, using the word "TV" instead of "Tivo". It is now fixed.
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Post by Seth on Dec 31, 2007 10:40:10 GMT -5
For that error, I pronounce myself the winner of our match.
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