Third Times The Charm?

["Iron Heart" Ethan King]

Third character here in WCF, third time coming into the feedback board. Time to see how I stack up, I think!

I wanted to wait a little longer this time before I made a thread and asked for opinions on my work, just to let me get a hold of the character and understand how to write as him.

Here is my most recent RP: wcfwrestling.proboards.com/thread/29834/virtue-vice

Feel free to talk about this piece, or just my whole body of work in general! Any feedback / critcism is much appreciated.

[Joey Flash]

May 8, 2016 3:47:01 GMT -5 "Iron Heart" Ethan King said:

Third character here in WCF, third time coming into the feedback board. Time to see how I stack up, I think!

I wanted to wait a little longer this time before I made a thread and asked for opinions on my work, just to let me get a hold of the character and understand how to write as him.

Here is my most recent RP: wcfwrestling.proboards.com/thread/29834/virtue-vice

Feel free to talk about this piece, or just my whole body of work in general! Any feedback / critcism is much appreciated.

No critique needed. You've always had the talent, you've now found the right voice for it.

This guy is absolutely the next to blow, if you're not reading his work you're missing out. The same feeling I had with Howie and Sanchez, this character has that same aura - that's the biggest compliment I can give.

Main event calibre already in my opinion. Keep bangin' lil homie - the most important thing for you now is consistency, keep on bringing it every week no matter the opponent and it will establish a great base for you to go in any direction you want. I feel the best thing I did with Flash is lay a foundation of continuing backstory / character exposition and storytelling at first which then allows you to expand your horizons creatively and essentially fuck around a bit.