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Biggs Rookie "Every Dog Has Its Day.." Posts: 333	Don't Drink The Water...Feedback? Feb 24, 2007 19:52:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Biggs on Feb 24, 2007 19:52:41 GMT -5 All the cool kids are doing it! Could I trouble a few of you for some feedback? I felt it was a decent roleplay after a couple weeks of crap.
	IN BIGGS WE TRUST! WCF Accomplishments: World Champion (x1) Television Champion (x2) Tag Team Champion (x2) Win: 28 Lose: 11 Draw: 1

Corey Black Asgardian KING OF ALL WRESTLERS Posts: 18,204	Don't Drink The Water...Feedback? Feb 24, 2007 19:53:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Corey Black on Feb 24, 2007 19:53:47 GMT -5 /Nagasaki'd

Seth Owner Posts: 14,284	Don't Drink The Water...Feedback? Feb 24, 2007 19:56:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Seth on Feb 24, 2007 19:56:20 GMT -5 The first part was very arousing. Sexually. What I'm trying to say is that it gave me an erection.

Corey Black Asgardian KING OF ALL WRESTLERS Posts: 18,204	Don't Drink The Water...Feedback? Feb 24, 2007 19:58:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Corey Black on Feb 24, 2007 19:58:11 GMT -5 What he's REALLY trying to say is that his mangina is very moist.

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Post by Skyler Striker on Feb 24, 2007 23:51:50 GMT -5

biggs said:

All the cool kids are doing it! Could I trouble a few of you for some feedback? I felt it was a decent roleplay after a couple weeks of crap.

I'll answer the call. Unlike the rest of you

Opening with speech was a nice surprise. Everyone opens with description. What I like about your rping is that you're consistently following through on a story or your circumstances (e.g. Jose Jose). I don't know what else to say as I'm less of a veteran than you but good job and keep up the consistency.

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John Gable: Hey, Seth. I won't pretend to know what is going on but if you ever see this. I would just like to ask if you could at least grant access to the RP boards. I really like reading old RPs. They mean a lot to me. I put a lot of work into them. Jun 8, 2020 13:47:58 GMT -5

John Gable: And there is a friend I have been wanting to show them to because they want to read them as well. So, it would mean a lot to me that, if you see this, you could open of the RP boards again just so I could see it. If it isn't any trouble. Jun 8, 2020 13:48:58 GMT -5

Stuart Slane: Are the Results Archives gone? I clicked the link on the WCFWrestling.com page and nothing came up but a Proboards ad. Dec 16, 2020 16:19:05 GMT -5

Don't Drink The Water...Feedback?

Post by Biggs on Feb 24, 2007 19:52:41 GMT -5

Post by Corey Black on Feb 24, 2007 19:53:47 GMT -5

Post by Seth on Feb 24, 2007 19:56:20 GMT -5

Post by Corey Black on Feb 24, 2007 19:58:11 GMT -5

Post by Skyler Striker on Feb 24, 2007 23:51:50 GMT -5

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