Assistance with Tone needed! (I love you all!)

[Teo Blaze]

Hey guys! Your friendly neighborhood luchador here with some requests.

For reasons that I will not yet reveal, I had the opportunity to go a bit more experimental this week with my RP. Now first let me mention the actual word count is pretty low, so I know this RP would likely not win me any of the weeks lol...

But I want to know, this is probably one of the goofier ones I've done since joining. I just couldn't bring myself to be dramatic this week, so I went hard on the reverse lever lol....

But I need some feedback on whether this tonal shift is something worth pursuing or whether it's worthy of earning me an uppercut. I enjoyed writing it of course, but I don't want to hurt myself in the long run if there are red flags. So if anyone has any thoughts, don't hold back!

Teo del Sol Answers a Question

[Lilith]

Goofy Teo is the BEST Teo! Hands freaking DOWN!!!

[Cormack MacNeill]

I'm no judge, but I thoroughly enjoyed reading that RP.

I think a light tone is OK, just not every week.

That being said, it was well written

[Tiffany White]

Your rp straight up reads like a bowl of fruity pebbles. I lol'd.

In all seriousness tho a quick stab at goofiness is fine and dandy if done sparingly and well, and I think this RP was def done well. Just don't do it all the time.