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Post by K. L. Henson on Feb 22, 2016 0:24:11 GMT -5
Okay, so I am really wanting to hear thoughts. I don't feel it is the strongest RP I've written but I put so much into it that I am curious if it came out okay! Please let me know what you think. Also, because I feel kinda bad taking the spot from lines of the week from lilith for my selfish purpose...go check that out as well.
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Post by lost on Feb 22, 2016 0:38:11 GMT -5
I will drop you a pm tomorrow with my insight for what it's worth.
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Post by Stuart Slane on Feb 22, 2016 12:43:57 GMT -5
I enjoyed it. Nice character study of the Gables with some foreshadowing of how this alliance with #BeachKrew could eventually blow up in John's face (if I'm reading it right). Gable's motivation for wanting to beat Flash was clear and well done, but the promo could have used more discussion about the other two Sentinels members.
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