Feedback: Off Come the Hoop Earrings!

[Benjamin Atreyu]

Hey guys, figured I'd give this another shot, haha.

Either way, was not entirely proud of this one, felt it was a bit of a mess, and while I'm not looking for compliments, if any of you found something the worked, please let me know, but generally, if anyone has feedback of any sort, feel free to lay it on me.

[Stuart Slane]

I liked Atreyu feeling indignant about having to stoop to everyone else's level with his "shoot".

I also laughed out loud when he called Andre Jenson a "wood-elf humping fuck".

[Benjamin Atreyu]

Feb 7, 2016 22:35:05 GMT -5 Stuart Slane said:

I liked Atreyu feeling indignant about having to stoop to everyone else's level with his "shoot".

I also laughed out loud when he called Andre Jenson a "wood-elf humping fuck".

Thanks, man. Glad you got some enjoyment out of that line, haha.

If there is anything I've learned from this RP, its that I can get tired of writing the word "fuck" haha.