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Post by Earth-616 Holmes on Jan 3, 2016 17:04:03 GMT -5
Hey. Alright so after reading the advice from Moor's reviews, I try to incorporate the great reviews, and suggestions to improve the mistakes I made. Hopefully you guys can give me a word up. Sometimes to succeed, you have to fail.
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Post by Lilith on Jan 3, 2016 19:15:07 GMT -5
I liked it a lot. Enjoyed the read for sure shoot part of the rp was good, gave me a good idea of who your character is (something I didnt know prior to reading it) and the formatting was also good Not sure if I even noticed any bad points I could tell you to improve upon to be honest! Keep up the good work
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