Post by Teo Blaze on Nov 30, 2015 22:36:15 GMT -5
Hey Guys, I normally don't do this, but despite the comparatively short length, I am trying for a slightly different feel in my RP's. Basically I am curious if you guys think this is a good direction to go in or it just sounds cool in my head. Be honest, I can take it lol.
There's gonna be a few twists and turns coming up, this is kind of planting the seeds for that-
And also I would appreciate feedback on the shooting aspect, as I felt like that could have been stronger but was dumbfounded what more to say without dragging it out needlessly.
Anyway, fire away, this is kind of a big character overhaul if I move forward, so if people are cringing, I need to know now before I reveal Teo has actually been a dog at a control panel the entire time.
An Emergency Broadcast
There's gonna be a few twists and turns coming up, this is kind of planting the seeds for that-
And also I would appreciate feedback on the shooting aspect, as I felt like that could have been stronger but was dumbfounded what more to say without dragging it out needlessly.
Anyway, fire away, this is kind of a big character overhaul if I move forward, so if people are cringing, I need to know now before I reveal Teo has actually been a dog at a control panel the entire time.
An Emergency Broadcast
