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Earth-616 Holmes Main Eventer Yo ho! As fiddle can be, WCF is the right place for me, Writing and sharing is so drama free! Posts: 3,908	"I can't resist the one thing that I love" - Feedback. Nov 30, 2015 21:50:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Earth-616 Holmes on Nov 30, 2015 21:50:32 GMT -5 Be honest, and straight up. I need everything.
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Post by Wade Moor on Nov 30, 2015 22:04:47 GMT -5

Nice intro RP. You hit every nail on the head that you could without being extreme in the details. Its cool to hear about Andre's past experiences in the squared circle. It's good that you touched on that without going into extraneous detail about it. Andre is coming into the sport refreshed. Clean slate. Great stuff.

The only real critique that I have is the text is a little too large. Some might see it as you trying to "fill" out your promo with a larger font. If it's how you roll, that's all good, but I would shy away from it in the future!

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Post by Earth-616 Holmes on Nov 30, 2015 22:09:43 GMT -5

Thanks. Yeah, sorry about that. I'm so used to MLA format due to my back to back college writing classes I had, and they always said 14 text. I couldn't help it ha ha! Besides, it doesn't matter if you fill. It's about quality > quantity right?

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