Some Feedback On The New Shit

[Raymond Hatcher]

So, since I've come back I've been writing this story that's unlike anything I've written before. I thought out the concept of the story during my time off, but when I returned and it actually came to sitting down and writing it, it's been a lot harder than I thought. Since this isn't like anything I've written before it's really uncharted waters for me and has been putting my skills to the tests. With the latest installment the story is starting to reach a real important point and I think some of you are starting to figure out where it's going, I was thinking now would be a good time to get some of your thoughts on the project. Let me know what you guys think, good or bad either way it's constructive to me, even if you just wanna shit on it, I'd rather hear that than nothing at all. Okay so have at it guys. Be honest, brutally honest.

-Door Ajar

-Missing Something

-The Travel Documentary

-[a href="http://wcfwrestling.proboards.com/thread/27285e-vacation"]No Time For A Vacation[/a]

-Jungle Fever


:: Update: Just added No Time For A Vacation and Jungle Fever to the list. It's been a minute since I've posted this and I'm still waiting for any feedback, if any of you have any time and insight you'd like to throw my way please do, I'm desperate :-( :: 

[Raymond Hatcher]

Are you guys just such punk bitches that you're afraid to tell me how awful I am?

Seriously guys I would really love some feedback.

[Wade Moor]

Bad. 0/10 would read again.

Haha, JK my man. I'll hit you up with some feedback the minute I'm not on my phone.

[Raymond Hatcher]

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