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[David Sanchez]

Just looking for a little bit of feedback on the format of the chat portion of my latest RP.

Took an age to code it to look as much like a chat-room conversation as possible so basically just looking to see if there's anything I could have done better.

No, I don't know who the Smark is before anybody just asks that, he simply replied to my PM.

Any other comments in relation are also appreciated, thanking you.

<3

[Kyle]

Since you asked for specifics on the chat portion of the promo, I'll tackle that. Overall, I think it was a creative and different approach to what can be a rather mundane cliche in the e-fedding world, the interview. I was kind of imagining the sound typewriters made as I read yours and the Smark's and I love how the layout was similar to the chat we use, nice touch. My only advice is to use this technique sparingly, not because it was bad, but because it places so much into the shoot that it detracts from other aspects of the promo. I think it worked this week because it was new, but if you were to let it become a weekly thing, you might lose readers down the road. But yeah, I was a fan of it.

Overall, I think it was a solid promo. The CD was to the point, gave me a little glimpse into Sanchez past, which is always good because you're coming in knowing years and years of his history, while most of the rest of us know nothing. The shoot was strong, with a good recap on last week, hype for Revenge, and a focus on this week all wrapped into one. Some of the humor didn't stick with me, but if the response you've gotten from others, it worked for a lot of people. I can tell, though, that you've put a lot of effort into researching not only your opponent, but events in the WCF history, so props to you for that.

Oh, and I liked your whole challenge to the former US champions; I figured you were doing something like when I was chatting with you the other day. Neat idea and I hope it sparks some interest down the road.

Again, I think you did rather well this week. Should be a good match between you and Hatch

[David Sanchez]

Hey, thanks man.