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David Sanchez
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Input? Jul 16, 2015 11:51:25 GMT -5

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Post by David Sanchez on Jul 16, 2015 11:51:25 GMT -5

Could I please get a little bit of feeding on the RP's "El Hombre de Pollo" and the latest "metamfiezomaiophobia"

I've been a lot happier with these personally than my original roleplays but still want anything I can use to make them better.

No need to sugar-coat or such, looking for some honest criticism.

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Joey Flash Legend @mrflash GOAT Posts: 380,315	Input? Jul 16, 2015 12:43:51 GMT -5 via mobile Howard Black and David Sanchez like this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Joey Flash on Jul 16, 2015 12:43:51 GMT -5 I have only three words for you regarding your RP, character and build so far. You get it.
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David Sanchez
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The Man in the Iron Mask

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Input? Jul 16, 2015 12:55:08 GMT -5

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Post by David Sanchez on Jul 16, 2015 12:55:08 GMT -5

Thanks dude. Always nice to hear.

My shooting is a bit rusty and general sentence structure has always been a pain in my ass but I feel like I'm getting there. This place is a lot harder to gauge than anywhere else that I've been though so it's always helpful to get a bit of insight into what could be done better.

Edit: 100th post. Woo!

Edit II: Can some kind Admin please move this to the correct board, just noticed I parked it in the next door neighbor's drive.

Last Edit: Jul 16, 2015 13:48:48 GMT -5 by David Sanchez

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