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Post by Howard Black on May 5, 2015 15:25:02 GMT -5
V: Lexington and Concord, Babylon and MexicoSo this is the RP I wrote this week for my big match with the Sentinels against the Vapor Kings! I hammered this out in a few days to procrastinate on a paper due tomorrow and since I leave early Thursday morning for a road trip! Still, I don't want "a few days" to sound like I phoned it in for the biggest match I've had so far: I've stayed up pretty late the last couple of nights working on this monster. In fact, I think this is the best RP I've written so far. So what do you think? Think I've pulled my weight for the group? Think it's too long? Tone shift near the end too jarring? Thanks for your feedback in advance!
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Post by Joey Flash on May 5, 2015 15:33:18 GMT -5
Fuck you Howard.
To beat this we need to come absolutely 100%, add Dune and Occy and mothafucka this is probably going to be the best collection of six roleplays in a match this year.
Yeah, you did good. Guaranteed top tier in the fed for you in future (and such a great fit with the Sentinels, they made the right choice)
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Post by Howard Black on May 5, 2015 15:36:35 GMT -5
That seriously means the world to me, Joey. I really hope I've at least set the bar.
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2015 15:40:23 GMT -5
Not gonna lie, when you first came here and did the whole anti-women wrestling thinggy I thought "oh Jeez another one dimensional character to join me and Occulo" I am glad to say that you have since proven me wrong. I wouldn't like to cross your path at this point... Mainly because I don't feel I would stand much of a chance against you lol good stuff, Howard. Good stuff indeed. Joey is right about you being top tier as well for sure!
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Post by Howard Black on May 5, 2015 15:49:06 GMT -5
Thanks, Kat Your praise also means the world to me. Not gonna lie: that anti-intergender wrestling bit totally happened on impulse without me thinking too much of it. When it erupted, I was terrified that I'd just dug the character into a hole that would be completely insurmountable to get out of, completely define him forever, and I may as well start from scratch. I'm really glad that I was wrong. Man, this is going to be such a great much. I can't wait for everyone else to post.
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2015 15:50:59 GMT -5
I know I was really worried about the same thing lol I'm glad it worked out for you
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Post by God King Dune on May 5, 2015 17:53:46 GMT -5
Loved it man, good shit! You definitely pulled your weight this week, don't doubt it for a second. The bar has been set high for this one. I didn't think it was too long seeing each segment pertained to the match. And I liked the ending with the Honey Badger -> False Prophet bit you set up in the beginning. So glad you were available and decided to accept our invitation brothaman.
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Post by Joey Flash on May 5, 2015 18:01:38 GMT -5
Fuck you too Dune.
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Post by Crow McMorris on May 5, 2015 18:06:11 GMT -5
Evil Roy Speede. You just fucking nailed it my friend! Great piece! Massive first shot across the bow of Imperium.
Shit just got real!
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Post by Seth on May 8, 2015 19:50:14 GMT -5
I'll take "Thread Titles I Also Used When I Showed A Woman My Penis" for 200, Alex.
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Post by Odin Balfore on May 9, 2015 0:03:07 GMT -5
So my titles should read: " Now thats pure Alabama Black Snake. It might be big but it ain't too damn Bookuu" For the Daily Double?
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Post by Alex Richards on May 10, 2015 10:14:26 GMT -5
I'll take "Thread Titles I Also Used When I Showed A Woman My Penis" for 200, Alex.
Hey, leave me out of this!
or do you mean Trebeck? Better post anyways just to be safe.
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