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Post by Deleted on May 3, 2015 16:35:52 GMT -5
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Post by Crow McMorris on May 3, 2015 16:47:30 GMT -5
Just a couple of quick notes:
1. Roleplay of the week? Put a fork in it, it's done. Awesome work. All the elements from last week have come together and you nailed it. Great, twisted storytelling.
2. The world you've created for this character is brilliant, Kat keeps tip toeing in and out of reality, but what's so good about the writing is that you never telegraph this, we get it from the well crafted prose and precise characterization you produce, it's Lewis Carroll meets Hunter S. Thompson and I'm loving it!
3. I'll make you a sandwich! lol
If you can keep this standard up? You'll be carrying gold in no time!
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Post by Deleted on May 3, 2015 16:57:33 GMT -5
Just a couple of quick notes: 1. Roleplay of the week? Put a fork in it, it's done. Awesome work. All the elements from last week have come together and you nailed it. Great, twisted storytelling. 2. The world you've created for this character is brilliant, Kat keeps tip toeing in and out of reality, but what's so good about the writing is that you never telegraph this, we get it from the well crafted prose and precise characterization you produce, it's Lewis Carroll meets Hunter S. Thompson and I'm loving it! 3. I'll make you a sandwich! lol If you can keep this standard up? You'll be carrying gold in no time! Thanks for the feedback Crow  Glad you liked it. I was slightly worried the jump from Katherine to Lilith was a little soon and sudden lol As for the sandwich thing... you can make me one whenever you want haha! As for the standard thing... I can really only write 1 rp a week... so it'll most likely be the TV title i'll go going after if i go after gold hmmmmmm! |
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