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Post by DampshawIII on Mar 15, 2015 13:54:33 GMT -5
So I tried something different with Reginald's latest RP, going from a basic on camera promo to an internal monologue with more description. It's still not a page long thing, but I still am trying to find a balance between saying just enough and being able to fill a page with quality writing.
Just wondering what everyone's thoughts on this new style are and if it's something I should continue with.
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Post by Jackson White on Mar 15, 2015 14:00:43 GMT -5
I just think your RPs are too short. If you could keep the quality and extend them a bit more it would be better. But I am new here too and I still need to learn a lot, so maybe a more experienced writer could give you better advice.
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Post by Joey Flash on Mar 15, 2015 14:03:01 GMT -5
The character of Damnshaw is very interesting and very engaging whenever he appears...but there just isn't enough of him.
He's a presence in the federation but could be so much more than that. Give us some back story, let us into his mind, let him talk about his opponents with a more expansive shoot.
Don't ever worry that you're not able to write a quality RP, you can absolutely no problem write a more fleshed out roleplay, don't doubt yourself.
In short, biggest tips:
- More character shit, I wanna know more about Reggie! - Much more shoot (it really is the bread and butter of any RP, you have such a great character and perspective to do it from: use it!) - Confidence! (You can hang, don't be overawed or intimidated by anybody)
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