Character feedback

[Marco Valintine]

Hey guys I would like to know what you all think of what you have seen of my new character ive brought into WCF

[Kaz]

It seems like you're enjoying writing for Marco more than Seifer. He seems a little more well rounded and more in your comfort zone.

I'll start off with your Love Pad interveiw with Orbit. That was a great piece! You seem at place in the host chair and having Orbit on the show for your first guest really put the show over and made it feel special for its first outing.

Now on to your promo. It was a fun look at Marco and your match commentary/shoot for Jayden was pretty good. The bit at the end felt like it dragged on just a little bit and could have been used to expand on the shoot. Overall it was a solid piece, and now I'm looking forward to seeing Valintine/Thunder at Payback and what Jayden comes up with for his promo.

Always sink your teeth in during the shoot. Go for the kill everytime dude, and you'll see that hard work pay dividends in no time.

Also, keep having fun!

[Marco Valintine]

Ill be honest i had a hard time with this one cause i had nothing to go off, in the past i had previous weeks rps and stuff to go off but with thunder returning also this week its a bit harder to come up with shoot material...

[Kaz]

Yeah, I understand that.

What I do if it's someone I don't really know (and in efedding there's a new member almost weekly) I just pop off the hip with organic shit. I try not to rely too heavily on past RP's and just free flow with that shit.

If you ever want any shoot advice, we can PM each other. I'm down to help!

[Jay Omega]

I'll throw in some unsolicited advice as well; generally, when I'm up against someone I know very little about, rather than try to tear them down I'll talk myself up. "You might be a tough sumbitch, but you're looking at a man who has faced down giants, blah blah blah, me awesome, you lame..." and so on and so forth. If you have some difficulty in constructing a literary sword, try making a verbal shield instead. Plus, it's a great way to give some backstory, and explore aspects of the character that may end up surprising you.

[Marco Valintine]

Cool, ill keep that all in mind... thanks guys