Post by "The Outlaw" Tony T on Apr 19, 2014 0:20:03 GMT -5
Hey guys! I'm brand new to wrestling RPs but thought the idea sounded very appealing. Please read over my RP I've just posted and let me know what you think, how I might improve, and all that bull shit
The first one you've done? Well, damn! That was nice, bro! I don't really have any actual negatives to point out other than the fact that this thread is supposed to go in the Roleplay Discussion board, directly below the OOC, but the fact that THIS is the worst I've got about your first roleplay is a serious positive.
Post by Corbin Stein on Apr 19, 2014 1:14:50 GMT -5
It was a lot better than most people's first ever role-play. Felt that maybe it was a little short, but it can be hard to manage length with making sure you're making it entertaining for the viewer. Character development was good, and the trash talk although brief was well-constructed and written. Great work for a beginner.
Post by "The Outlaw" Tony T on Apr 19, 2014 2:22:58 GMT -5
Thank you very much for the comments! I was worried it was too long, that's good to know. I have much more story behind Tony T but felt it should be revealed slowly. So keep reading and hopefully you guys will like my stuff.
p.s. Sorry for posting in the wrong spot, maybe an admin would be kind enough to move the post to the proper location?
John Gable: Hey, Seth. I won't pretend to know what is going on but if you ever see this. I would just like to ask if you could at least grant access to the RP boards. I really like reading old RPs. They mean a lot to me. I put a lot of work into them.
Jun 8, 2020 13:47:58 GMT -5
John Gable: And there is a friend I have been wanting to show them to because they want to read them as well. So, it would mean a lot to me that, if you see this, you could open of the RP boards again just so I could see it. If it isn't any trouble.
Jun 8, 2020 13:48:58 GMT -5
John Gable: Please and thank you.
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