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Post by "The Outlaw" Tony T on Apr 19, 2014 0:20:03 GMT -5
Hey guys! I'm brand new to wrestling RPs but thought the idea sounded very appealing. Please read over my RP I've just posted and let me know what you think, how I might improve, and all that bull shit  |
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Post by Speede on Apr 19, 2014 0:35:31 GMT -5
The first one you've done? Well, damn! That was nice, bro! I don't really have any actual negatives to point out other than the fact that this thread is supposed to go in the Roleplay Discussion board, directly below the OOC, but the fact that THIS is the worst I've got about your first roleplay is a serious positive.
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Corbin Stein
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"Never before, has brilliance looked this damn good."
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Post by Corbin Stein on Apr 19, 2014 1:14:50 GMT -5
It was a lot better than most people's first ever role-play. Felt that maybe it was a little short, but it can be hard to manage length with making sure you're making it entertaining for the viewer. Character development was good, and the trash talk although brief was well-constructed and written. Great work for a beginner.
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Post by "The Outlaw" Tony T on Apr 19, 2014 2:22:58 GMT -5
Thank you very much for the comments! I was worried it was too long, that's good to know. I have much more story behind Tony T but felt it should be revealed slowly. So keep reading and hopefully you guys will like my stuff.
p.s. Sorry for posting in the wrong spot, maybe an admin would be kind enough to move the post to the proper location?
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Post by Deleted on Apr 19, 2014 8:34:44 GMT -5
My mans, you does great jobs with these writings! Welcomes to the WCFs! YEAH! #Fishsticks!
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