The Progeny of Waylon or The Electronic Soul

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So what did you guys think? I worked my ass off on this one. Hoping you guys like it.

[Jonny Fly]

I'm trying to read through all the Ultimate Showdown RP's and wanted to make a note on this one. I really, really liked it. Probably my favorite RP of yours since last year.

The World Title match had to have been tough to call, but I wanted to write this to at least let you know that this is the type of stuff that will win you that match more times than not.

Props.

[Seth]

YEAH I really liked this too. I love the whole future universe you set up and everything, really cool stuff.

I gave Orbit some constructive criticism (not on this board but elsewhere) on his roleplay series so I'll leave you some too. Rather than one huge standalone roleplay, I think it could've been effective as a drawn out series for a month or so, culminating at the PPV. Or alternatively since it was such a strong idea you could've split it into three parts and then structured the rest of the roleplays around it somehow.

Just ideas off the top of my head - you're a better writer than I am!, and this came off really well, so y'know.

I actually think it'd be interesting to see more future stuff from this "universe" if possible. If you can do that consistently in a way that relates back to what stuff Waylon is going through its pure gold.

[Scott Savage]

hmmmm... I hadn't even thought of going back to it. That's not a bad idea. I actually thought about making it a two parter, but then I realized I would only have one Trash talk RP, so I made it one. I think it may have hurt it a little, but I'm still really pleased with it. I'm glad to know you guys liked it too Just remember, no one ever said Walter Cash died in the collapse

[Steve Orbit]

The only thing I was hoping for was some kind of futuristic pimp-bot-- maybe next time