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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2012 17:36:07 GMT -5
I thought it was short and to the point, and the message was clearly delivered to the reader. However, I felt that it was lacking in some parts, particularly in the middle, which in my opinion hampered the impact of the beginning and end.
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Post by Doc Henry on Jan 22, 2012 17:44:57 GMT -5
Are you kidding?? It had just the right amount of filler to accentuate the point you were making.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2012 17:53:01 GMT -5
Are you kidding?? It had just the right amount of filler to accentuate the point you were making. You know, I was thinking about it, and at first I agreed with what you're saying Doc. But then I remembered I was judging it on what the old CD would post. Now that he's World Champion, I expect just a little bit more filler from him. At least one full sentence between the beginning and the end is all I ask. Or an Iron Man reference. |
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Post by Doc Henry on Jan 22, 2012 17:54:30 GMT -5
Yeah, an iron man reference would make that the RP of the Year....
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2012 18:04:35 GMT -5
Yeah, an iron man reference would make that the RP of the Year.... Or Tank Reaper crashing through the wall on a cocaine high. |
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Post by Doc Henry on Jan 22, 2012 18:18:55 GMT -5
Tank Reaper for WCF HOF 2012!!!
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Post by Corey Black on Jan 23, 2012 22:12:58 GMT -5
I lol'd.
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