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Post by Yukon Jack on Jan 5, 2012 20:22:20 GMT -5
I broke the fourth wall. I also went back in time to give Yukon Jack history. Please let me know what you guys thought.
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Post by Night Rider on Jan 6, 2012 14:09:05 GMT -5
I Liked it! I thought it was very descriptive and had a good flow to it. It helped give a little background into your character and a little insight as well. Good job!
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Post by Jeff Purse on Jan 6, 2012 14:22:35 GMT -5
I liked it as well, I really didn't like that blue that you used though. Im not a fan of completly breaking the fourth wall, because I take it that anything shown in a promo is on camera, and on camera they are performing, but you didn't do it badly.
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Post by Yukon Jack on Jan 6, 2012 14:41:24 GMT -5
Nothing in my role play was on camera. Even the wrestling match. It was at an indy fed and not on film. It wasn't a promo. The interview was not filmed. Just people in the loby over hearing. So do most people feel if you can read it, it's filmed? I thought it made sense that it was a day dream Jack was having before his interview with Hank. Thanks for the feedback guys. I liked your role play Nightrider.
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Post by Seth on Jan 6, 2012 14:51:57 GMT -5
FYI I'm going to move this to the RP Feedback forum, thats where this kinda thing should go. No big deal though!
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Post by Jeff Purse on Jan 6, 2012 15:14:19 GMT -5
Nah, I am not saying you have to have it where it is all on film. That is just how I do it and how I prefer, but it wasn't bad at all.
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Post by Corey Black on Jan 6, 2012 19:46:31 GMT -5
There is always debates about "on camera" stuff, look at it this way.. how is your opponent supposed to play off this? Pretend like it never happened? That's kinda sucky, almost unsportsmanlike.
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Post by Yukon Jack on Jan 6, 2012 20:37:58 GMT -5
Well, I would guess, the interview would go into WCF magazine. It was a flash back day dream that Jack was having before the interview with Hank. People would know about Jack's wrestling career before coming to WCF. I don't want to be unsportsmanlike. I really liked Nathan's promo.
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Post by Corey Black on Jan 6, 2012 20:39:25 GMT -5
Oh no, don't take it like that. You RP how you want, I'm just saying it's not cool to not give your opponent anything to work off of. Winning is nice, yes, but writing and having fun is way better.
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Post by Yukon Jack on Jan 6, 2012 23:32:04 GMT -5
The last efed I was in only cared about winning. I like to write. I only want to have fun. I want to win, but fun is what a efed is about. Right?
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Post by Allen Guiliano on Jan 7, 2012 0:04:57 GMT -5
Having that attitude will get you a lot of respect here. Those who are here just to win matches usually dont last very long.
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Post by Jeff Purse on Jan 7, 2012 12:13:08 GMT -5
Yeah, I agree. Especially because, I don't care who you are, you will be beat. Its not real wrestling, its a game, essentially. If you aren't having fun, or here to have fun, whats the point? In my opinion. Sometimes it may seem as though you should have won, and you feel you should have, and you don't, but to dwell on it is only going to make you miserable. Move on and keep enjoying it.
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Post by Yukon Jack on Jan 7, 2012 14:28:24 GMT -5
I was in three other e-feds years and years ago. The e-fed's, I was in, had four or five guys always winning. Even when I didn't think they should have won, they did. Lame politics. I got tired of it. I even co-ran an e-fed with a real cool guy, but the "owner" was a douche bag. He always wanted his friends to win. In the end it wasn't fun anymore and I just quit. I am kinda starting all over. It has been 6 or 7 years. I am rusty, but I am having fun.
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Post by Corey Black on Jan 7, 2012 14:40:40 GMT -5
Even when I didn't think they should have won, they did. Lame politics. <.< >.> |
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