Quinton Cross
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Post by Quinton Cross on Sept 26, 2018 16:37:03 GMT -5
So... I normally don't ask for such a thing right away, but considering this is a new place for me figured I'd do a thread up and see what y'all thought of my first Cross Rp here? ***Takes a deep breath, slowly releases the breath of air.*** WCF - Track 01: "U Not Like Me"Ok, so yea let me have it lol. What did you think of my 1st WCF Rp with Cross? - Gabe.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2018 23:43:20 GMT -5
Will do full feedback after work tomorrow. However I will say, as I had to learn here, using the current weeks promos against others is frowned upon
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Post by Quinton Cross on Sept 27, 2018 13:18:41 GMT -5
Gotchya, probably due to the whole 1 Rp limit I assume? That's good to know considering my last fed you could use the content of the current promo week againt your opponent even though it was a 1 Rp fed.
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Post by Odin Balfore on Sept 27, 2018 17:45:36 GMT -5
like response shoot? oddly enough, with all the creativity that we let fly in WCF, response shoot promos and using your opponents current week promo as a main focus is frowned upon here. Like, you can do it, its not an insta loss but its a heavy negative.
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Quinton Cross
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Post by Quinton Cross on Sept 27, 2018 20:15:06 GMT -5
Understandable totally. I know now not to do that again, wasn't so sure about it, but I am now, thankya for the heads up, much appreciated.
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Post by Noble Savage on Sept 28, 2018 6:22:45 GMT -5
like response shoot? oddly enough, with all the creativity that we let fly in WCF, response shoot promos and using your opponents current week promo as a main focus is frowned upon here. Like, you can do it, its not an insta loss but its a heavy negative. I had no idea! I'm glad I hardly ever do that though lol but I really like this. When I composed "living Past the past" I kinda took a jab at your current week's promo, but I'm glad that didn't grant me a loss 😲 I think so far that's the only time I've done it. But with that said, I think management should make it a rule... Like, it should be posted somewhere at least. Because if it wasn't for Cross making this thread I wouldn't have known either, so I imagine any other newcomer would need to be told 🤔
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Post by Odin Balfore on Sept 28, 2018 11:18:27 GMT -5
Dont get me wrong u can mention stuff but like not shot for shot response. We had a guy wait all week, ud post anf his rp was a giant reply. It was lame
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2018 14:39:03 GMT -5
Roleplay: U Not Like Me Hander: Quinton Cross
Overall thoughts: A strong debut for a tough match
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Rating Overview
Scene Description: 4 Character Development: 3 Shoot: 2.5 Flow: 2
RATING: 2.88 of 5
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CRITICAL REVIEW
Definitely a strong start out of the gate jumping right in to an environment you don't know like some of us do. You showed some major guts.
Scene Description:
Nice job describing the "Poppin' Off Records" building and the descriptions of the minor/supporting characters was done very nicely.
Character Development:
You showed us exactly who Cross is. He is a take no shit kinda guy who won't let anyone bad mouth him at all. Great job.
Shoot:
Shoot is where matches are won and lost most times. In a close match up the better shoot will win every time as far as I can tell. In your shoot you did excellent negating some things that were said about Cross in others RPs however, as myself and Odin stated, its not againt the rules but is generally frowned upon to play off a lot of your opponents promos. I think you'll take this advice and run with it.
Flow:
I know Quinton speaks in ebonics but sometimes I felt it was over done and made the overall promo hard to follow. I get it is who he is but maybe back it off a touch?
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SUGGESTIONS
I can tell you did some homework and I enjoyed this read. Lessen the ebonics so it is a little easier to read and follow and I am sure you will be on your way to the top in no time.
Jay aka Kennedy Matthews and Kylie Moore
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Post by Quinton Cross on Sept 28, 2018 19:09:45 GMT -5
Much appreciate Jay kinda allows me to see what I'll need to work on etc. so very much appreciated and glad you enjoyed it.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2018 20:03:34 GMT -5
Anytime man
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